What do you think about my songs?

[jshreiner]

hey, took up guitar about 1 and a half years ago, and for about that last year have been writing my own songs..i was wondering what kind of feedback i would get. please tell me what you think about my music, and what could posibly make it better. thanks



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j shreiner

[NCFreak]

Hey, you're that guy!! Sounded pretty good. Only thing I didn't like was that the guitar didn't flow very well sometimes. Other than that, it was some mighty fine a'pickin' and a'singin'. Oh, wait...I used that line already.

[jshreiner]

well, ok thanks for the help, if you have any other comments, feel free to tell me. Everything helps. thanks

j shreiner

[NCFreak]

I replied in that other thread.