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ManalinRebel
09-27-2003, 02:55 AM
I know, it's pretty short, but for once I tried to finish a piece in one sitting. Not revised besides spelling either. But it was inspired by A Lighthouse's Tale So I thought some of you might find it interesting- I could only wonder what was going through the mind of the keeper after all that, so.... I decided to figure out what the he might have been thinking of. I know it's not a true story or anything, just such a touching song. Oh yes, an dI know the title needs some work...... I'm out


Shattered Light

Torn by time, worn by the purpose of nature. It looms there, amongst the velvet sky, hued with a golden purple, majestic until the coming of the morn; now it was dusk, the time of silent solemn reflection, when the earth seems to teem over with its own florescent aurora of lingering thoughts; enveloped in a somber silence. The sun, sets behind the light house, drifts away- Away from his reach, his fingers wish to graze upon what brings hope, what brings life to the world. His arms strain out through the atmosphere of sunset, which is still and foreboding. His flesh yearns, aches to burn within the sun. Fire. Golden flames. Purity. To die, to fall without the presence of the substance which was once so full of life, to have his ashes drift away in the wind, to have his past burnt, to have his life made pure; absent from this world. Life’s beauty he can only touch and see. He can not feel it; he can not sense it, it is no longer pristine. Man has infected the earth, so to have no existence upon this doomed piece of rock and magna, all suspended in nothing, to be made free by flickering flames of creation and flames of destruction he decides, would be bliss. But the sea lingers before him, below him; waves of treacherous blue throw themselves against the rocks, with no rhythm, only existence. It derides him, urges him, and seduces him, with s of water quaking violently and hypnotically. It would nearly make him vanish completely; not as fire would, but it would swallow him, devour him, store him in its depths, hiding him for eternity. A feckless substitute, but there was no other way. Taking his hands down, curling them in, letting them wilt and wither after one last desperate reach, he gazes out towards the ocean, then towards the sun, and then the lighthouse, whose railing he is perched on, swaying in the stillness. It’s light, once full of life, had rusted over time, and a final bitter wind from twilight’s storm had shattered it, and the light; the life had scattered amongst reflections of emptiness, been lost amongst the shards of glass. He was the lighthouse, rusted by the presence of love, and shattered by its passing. How strange, how ironic, that the same storm that broken the inner essence of the lighthouse, had taken away what had made him soft and vulnerable, and in doing so, destroyed his soul. Lights no more, darkness upon a night sky; he was nothing. They are empty and without purpose. He, however, can let his thoughts weave, and has choice. A choice, a decision, must be made. Fate, or mistake, destiny or coincidence, he either will perish, or be poisoned from the inside, until he cannot walk, or move, or think. Death in death. Or death in life. He has already begun to pass, his mind is shadowed; the final rays from the sun above do not enter him; they reflect, yet he can still feel the warmth, which makes him pine. A final tear moves down his cheek, punctuating. Ending. It falls longingly from his chin, and collapses amongst the pavement. There is no more. No words, no thoughts, no anger, no sadness, only a single tear, and with it carries what is left within him. Nothing now, not even fear. He does not jump from the railing, he does not run, he does not dive. He merely falls, limp, numb. AS the blurred colors swirl without meaning around him, the air snapping viciously at his face, billowing his clothes as if in a futile attempt to hold him up; to convince him that he may still live, and give him reason to, his eyes, gray and cold, set upon the patch of uneven sand; a body buried crudely under grains of white, pure as what they surround. It was her. The storm had taken her, and the ocean refused to devour her as it did the ship which had been cast into the depths. He had wished she had stayed there, her body was what had destroyed him; to wonder, to hope, was better than to see her lifeless lips, and kiss them, and taste the cold, how they were of nothing how they were of a soulless body. She had taken his heart with her; their souls were both gone in an instant. His eyes still blankly stare at the mound of nothing, as he hits the water and the rocks. To be stripped of nothing was what he sought, and he dies amongst the tide for this reason; and the light house, full of the absence which had pushed its keeper of its side, its stony face rigid, glared down in envy…

tat2queen
09-27-2003, 08:57 PM
Chill bumps.

loubou2
09-27-2003, 09:19 PM
:eek: :eek: WOW:eek: :eek:

that was awesome tat2queen, realy it was! very poetic and voluptuous in details and....uh....great job! mind if I post a short story I was inspired to write from the lighthouse tale? if it bothers ya, just say sumthing- I know it'll never amount to your wonderful work!




The Lighthouse’s Tale“I am a lighthouse, worn by the weather and the waves.
I keep my lamp lit, to warn the sailors on their way.”

The waves crash violently against the rocky outcrop below, sending their angry cries into the misty air above. Here I sit, sending my beacon into the endless ocean horizon before me. Seagulls call out as they swoop and hover around me.
I am a lighthouse, old and alone on this rocky cliff near the ocean. As the wind blows and the waves crash on the sand, I’m reminded of what was, and what can never be. Everything has a story- each pebble in the sand, every wave of the salty ocean. Like them, I have my own.
I once had a master, a kind and old sailor. Together, we watched the ocean, taking care of the voyagers on the sea. I was happy then.
I grew to love my master. Every night, he’d sit on my tower, and we’d watch the sapphire blue ocean turn red as it swallowed the golden sun. When storms swirled over the ocean, he’d send my light into the darkness. Together, we warned the sailors on their journeys. We saw many ships go by, each one with a different destination, unknown to us.

“We’ve got a job to do,” he’d say with a sleepy smile as he lit my lamp.

At night, as he crawled into bed in my living quarters, he’d speak to me. He’d tell me old stories of the sea, tales from voyages in his younger years. Sometimes, he’d tell me his secrets.

“I feel so alone here,” he’d say with regret in every syllable, “like a tiny shp in the middle of the sea. I need someone,” he said as slumber crept upon his heavy eyelids and pulled him into the world of dreams. I’d answer with a small creak as the wind crashed against me.

I loved my master, and it hurt me so much to hear his loneliness. Every night, as my light parted the darkness like a knife, I silently prayed to the stars, my nightly companions, that someday he’d find that someone to ease his pain, the pain that I, a simple lighthouse, could not heal.
One day, my master was painting my walls, a fresh coat of white. A beautiful woman approached from behind.

“Excuse me sir,” she said with tenderness.

My master followed the voice, turning to face the lovely creature. Her long red hair danced in the wind, playing on her pale face and neck. Her green eyes sparkled as she tucked a wild tuft of hair behind her dainty ear. Her maroon dress flapped in the breeze, seemingly dancing to the sound of the waves and the sea grass.
The salty air seemed to whisper, “Woman, beautiful fauna before thee,” in my master’s ear. He answered the call with his sleepy smile.
My master fell in love with her. Soon, every night she came to visit us. Together, we watched from my tower the sapphire blue ocean turn red as it swallowed the golden sun. When storms swirled over the ocean, they’d send my light into the darkness. Together, we warned the sailors on their journeys. We saw many ships go by, each one with a different destination, unknown to us.

“We’ve got a job to do,” they’d say with a sleepy smile as they lit my lamp.

My master had found the one. He loved her with every part of him; his fire was engulfed in her presence. He was young again, full of life and love. He planned to marry this girl, who shone with beauty and with light.
I was so pleased, and every night I thanked those stars, my nightly companions, for their gift.
As my master slipped under the covers, he said with is sleepy smile and warm blue eyes, “She’s my ship, and together, we’ll sail the seas, alone nevermore.”

One day, she had to leave. The woman had to return home; a death was her reason for her homecoming. Sadly, my master kissed her goodbye.
She boarded her ship, and my master climbed my tower. Together, we watched the sapphire blue ocean turn red as it swallowed the golden sun. He kept his misty eyes on the ship, watching it head for the horizon.
But, as the ocean sometimes does, waved began to grow. A storm began to swirl over the sea, thrashing the ship around like a toy boat. My master watched helplessly as the ship fought the giant waves in vain.
The wind crashed around me, and the sand slipped out o sea. My master watched as the ship crumbled against the rocks, helplessly from my tower.
Then on the next day, my keeper found he washed up on the shore. He kissed her cold face and vowed they’d be together again.
I watched him, saw him crying, as he buried her in the sand. Then he climbed my tower, and off the edge of me he ran.
I am a lighthouse, old and alone on this rocky cliff near the ocean. As the wind blows and the waves crash on the sand, I’m reminded of what was, and what can never be. And though I’m empty, I still warn the sailors on their way.

tat2queen
09-27-2003, 09:28 PM
Thanks sweetie, but that work isn't mine...it belongs to ManalinRebel. But you are right that it was awesome. And I enjoyed reading yours as well. You are both very creative.

Srol
09-28-2003, 12:20 AM
Jeez, it seems everyone has a story based on The Lighthouse's Tale.

I have one as well, but I won't put it up yet. Needs some fixing up :p

NCLuver333
09-28-2003, 12:04 PM
TRUE STORY...Well, a legend I guess....

Okay, so there is a lighthouse in Long Island Sound called LedgeLight Light House, and around the 1930's, there lived a lighthouse keeper named Ernie and his wife. His wife became depressed because she could never see the land, and she was always stuck in the lighthouse, until she went out to get supplies about every week, which included food and lamp oil. She became so depressed, she decided to leave Ernie, and marry the Long Island Farry captain. She left one morning to get supplies, but never came back. Ernie, in his misery, jumped off the lighthouse...

And that is supposedly a true story...I actually stayed overnight in that lighthouse, and the fog horns turned on at 5 in the morning, even though it was not foggy...We also watched The Sixth Sense, and all of the sudden, the TV turned off...So, we just turned it back on...But then later in the night, I think it was like 2 in the morning, the TV turned back on, even though it had been off for quite a few hours...So, maybe Ernie does exist...This sleepover we did with an organization called Project Oceanology, and it's a really cool program...One of the conselors jumped of the lighthouse and into the water...He's alive, but he thinks that he pinched a nerve in his neck...As to why he jumped, I have no clue...

tat2queen
09-28-2003, 09:21 PM
Wow...freaky cool:eek: and a little spooky!!![eek!!]

flutegrl71
09-28-2003, 09:57 PM
That's really cool--and Chris and his friend hadn't heard about this legend at all? Hmm...
As to why he jumped, I have no clue...
Uh, yeah, I'd look into that !

ManalinRebel
09-29-2003, 03:59 PM
It is a very moving song for sure, and I apprecciate the fact you guys liked it.Ii'm enjoying reading what comes out when other people listen to it.

Day
10-15-2003, 04:09 PM
Those were two very touching storys. I like them. And NCLuver333 you must have been spooked right? Crazy. now is there going to be a new thread on any otner songs?


Later Day